The Chapter Read

One chapter, up to 10,000 words

Is this chapter good enough, and if not, what exactly is wrong with it?

You've written it, revised it, and you still can't tell. Your supervisor said it needs more depth, or said nothing at all. Send me the chapter and I'll read it the way I read the 45 theses I've examined.

Send your supervisor's comments too, if you have them, and I'll tell you what they actually mean.

What you get back

The verdict: what would pass as it stands, what would come back, and what an examiner would say about it.

The three things an examiner presses on first, named and located in your text.

The fix order: what to do first, second, third, and roughly how long each takes.

The detail behind all of that, on how to fix with examples relevant in a separate feedback report.

Turnaround: five to seven working days from when your chapter arrives.

What this isn't. This isn't proofreading or line editing, and it isn't ongoing support. It's one chapter, one verdict, and a clear next step. If you want someone alongside you month to month, that's mentoring.